This deliverable will allow you to demonstrate your ability to properly review a given piece of writing and provide constructive criticism to improve the writing.
One of your co-workers has been given charge of constructing an email introducing the new line of textbooks that will be advertised to textbook committees and local school boards across the country. This opportunity is extremely important for the company, and the advertising team has planned to publicize the new line with a big push. They will start by sending an email to the prospective buyers. Since this email is a crucial part of the push, your coworker has asked for your constructive feedback before sending it to the prospective buyers.
Read the copy of her email here, and using what you have learned about collaborating and giving feedback, write her a return email that gives her constructive feedback to improve her email. Make sure your email contains the following:
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That’s why we have developed 5 beneficial guarantees that will make your experience with our service enjoyable, easy, and safe.
You have to be 100% sure of the quality of your product to give a money-back guarantee. This describes us perfectly. Make sure that this guarantee is totally transparent.Read more
Each paper is composed from scratch, according to your instructions. It is then checked by our plagiarism-detection software. There is no gap where plagiarism could squeeze in.Read more
Thanks to our free revisions, there is no way for you to be unsatisfied. We will work on your paper until you are completely happy with the result.Read more
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